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* Wider compatibility with the Guava and Guice libraries.
* Configuration of arbitrary hardware values in the compute abstraction.
-* Added support for new cloud providers:
+* Added support for new compute providers:
* Microsoft Azure Resource Manager
* ProfitBricks v3
* OneAndOne
+* Added support for new blob store providers:
* Backblaze B2
* Better integration with OSGi and Apache Karaf.
* Numerous bug fixes and performance improvements.
The complete list of fixed issues and improvements can be found [here](https://issues.apache.org/jira/secure/ReleaseNote.jspa?version=12327379&styleName=Html&projectId=12314430).
-We have also improved our CI system by adding compatibility builds with the core libraries and by adding weekly builds that run the live tests. Check it out at: [https://jclouds.ci.cloudbees.com](https://jclouds.ci.cloudbees.com).
+We have also improved [our CI system](https://jclouds.ci.cloudbees.com) by adding compatibility builds with the core libraries and OSGi framework, and by adding weekly builds that run the live tests. Check it out!
## <a id="computeimprovements"></a>Compute Improvements
-* Added support for Microsoft azure ARM, ProfitBricks v3 and OneAndOne.
-* Configuration of arbitrary hardware values in the compute abstraction. [Read more](/blog/2016/08/22/arbitrary-cpu-ram/) aboout this useful feature fruit of a GSoC 2016 project!
-* Added Seoul and Mumbai regions to AWS.
-* Implement the compute abstraction in CloudSigma v2.
-* Added the Miami region to CloudSigma v2.
-* Promoted Docker and OAuth apis to the main repo. The *groupId* for their respective dependencies changes to `org.apahce.jclouds.api`.
-* Promoted Google Compute Engine and ProfitBricks providers to the main repo. The *groupId* for their respective dependencies changes to `org.apahce.jclouds.provider`.
+* Added support for Microsoft Azure ARM, ProfitBricks v3 and OneAndOne.
+* Configuration of arbitrary hardware values (CPU, memory and disk space) in the compute abstraction. [Read more](/blog/2016/08/22/arbitrary-cpu-ram/) aboout this useful feature developed as part of a GSoC 2016 project!
+* Added `ap-northeast-2` (Seoul) and `ap-south-1` (Mumbai) regions to AWS.
+* Implemented the compute abstraction in CloudSigma v2.
+* Added the `cloudsigma2-mia` (Miami) region to CloudSigma v2.
+* Promoted Docker and OAuth APIs to the main repo. The *groupId* for their respective dependencies changes to `org.apache.jclouds.api`.
+* Promoted Google Compute Engine and ProfitBricks providers to the main repo. The *groupId* for their respective dependencies changes to `org.apache.jclouds.provider`.
## <a id="blobstoreimprovements"></a>BlobStore Improvements
-* Added multi-region support for BlobStore.
-
TODO: Changes related to the OLD swicft API?
+TODO: Other BlobStore changes?
## <a id="knownissues"></a> Known Issues
-* The json credentials file used in Google Cloud cannot be used in the jclouds CLI for Google Cloud Storage and for Google Compute Engine, when using a reusable compute service.
+* The JSON credentials file used in Google Cloud cannot be used in the jclouds CLI for Google Cloud Storage and for Google Compute Engine, when using a reusable compute service.
## <a id="credits"></a>Credits
jclouds would like to thank everyone who contributed time and effort in order to make this release happen:
-* [Rita Zhang](https://twitter.com/ritazzhang) and her team, especially [Jim Spring](https://twitter.com/jmspring) and [Janne Koskinen](https://twitter.com/jtjk), for their contributions to the Microsoft Azure ARM provider ant the OAuth apis.
+* [Rita Zhang](https://twitter.com/ritazzhang) and her team, especially [Jim Spring](https://twitter.com/jmspring) and [Janne Koskinen](https://twitter.com/jtjk), for their contributions to the Microsoft Azure ARM provider ant the OAuth APIs.
* [Josef Cacek](https://twitter.com/jckwart) for all his contributions to the Docker provider.
-* Ali Bazlamit for adding support for the ProfitBricks v3 and the OneAndOne providers.
+* [Ali Bazlamit](https://github.com/alibazlamit) for adding support for the ProfitBricks v3 and the OneAndOne providers.
* [Iván Lomba](https://twitter.com/ivanlomba) for choosing jclouds for his GSoC 2016 project and adding the support for arbitrary CPU and RAM values in the compute abstraction.
* Apache jclouds [PMC](http://people.apache.org/committers-by-project.html#jclouds-pmc) and community for verifying the release.
* Check out who has been busy on [Open Hub](https://www.openhub.net/p/jclouds/contributors?query=&sort=latest_commit).
