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== Joining the IPMC
-Joining the IPMC is just like joining any other PMC. Once enough merit and community involvement is demonstrated, PMC members will take notice and may vote on you to join. If you know of someone that you think should be considered, please send an email to *private.AT.incubator.apache.org*
+Joining the IPMC is just like joining any other PMC. Once enough merit and community involvement is demonstrated,
+PMC members will take notice and may vote on you to join. If you know of someone that you think should be considered,
+please send an email to *private.AT.incubator.apache.org*
-Foundation members may willingly join the IPMC at any time, to express desire send an email to *private.AT.incubator.apache.org*
+Foundation members may join the IPMC at any time by sending an email to *private.AT.incubator.apache.org*
== Members
